Monday, February 3, 2014

Response to Erik Kelemen's, "Critical Editing and Close Reading in the Undergraduate Classroom"


Erik Kelemen’s article, “Critical Editing and Close Reading in the Undergraduate Classroom” makes the case for the use of close reading along with textual criticism. He draws a distinction between these two approaches by stating the theoretical difference between close reading and textual criticism. The former “attends to the words on the page,” while textual criticism “attends to the text of one document in relation to these other textual possibilities…”(Kelemen 132). Hence, both of these approaches allow students to systematically derive meaning from the text, at the same time, understand how meaning of the text is derived through past interpretive processes.

Kelemen observes how close reading constructs interpretive meaning by an in-depth analysis of the text, holding the notion that meaning “can be fixed or is forever in free play” (Kelemen 131). As an additional point, Kelemen does not limit his definition of close reading as a New Critical method to only use what is available exclusively on the page.

Further, he applies David Rosenwasser and Jill Stephens’, description of the “The Method” in which they provide a rubric for close reading that requires "exhaustive iterations through the recording of the words, phrases, and thematic repetitions, the location of expressed and implied binary oppositions and finally a location of anomalies within these identified patterns" (Kelemen 127). To my mind, Kelemen’s description of Rosenwasser and Stephens’ “The Methods” transcends New Critical and Post-Modernist approaches to literature, allowing students to systematically locate points in the story that deal with social, political, and psychological issues, decreasing the arbitrariness of socialized readings of literature.

Additionally, I see an overlap between Kelemen's use of Rosenwasser and Stephens’ “The Methods” and my use of John D. Ramage, John C. Bean and June C. Johnson’s use of “double-entry logs” in The Allyn and Bacon Guide to Writing. In this case, the “double-entry log” is used as a tool for students to record and response to acquired sources during the research process. The double-entry log draws a distinction between the text and the student response allowing students a way to develop their response by paying close attention to textual evidence.

With tweaking, I have used this method in my literature courses as a way for students to record and document their responses to the text, at the same time, incorporate and apply their understanding of New Critical terms such as paradox, tone, diction, character, and theme while also considering the rhetorical, biographical, historical and social contexts.

On the other hand, Kelemen describes how critical editing as a form of textual criticism constructs an interpretation of the text through the acts of interpretation, paying close attention to variations in editions. While his description of the classroom activities seem a bit labor intensive and challenging, I think that this approach is worth exploring. Using Chaucer’s lyric, “Truth” as an example, Kelemen focuses his students’ attention on variations within different editorial versions. Once students are introduced to editorial theory, they pay close attention to these variations and in the end, make editorial changes while justifying these changes in the form of a short paper.

Kelemen leaves me wondering if textual criticism could be applied to other forms of writing about the text in question. For instance, could one use this method to incorporate reviews on the text along with criticism of the text? Would incorporating reviews and criticism illuminate how and provide evidence for why a particular text becomes canonized? 






4 comments:

  1. I'm intrigued by your idea for transporting the “double-entry log” from a research journal to the close reading of lit. I've used this method for research papers, but never thought of other uses. Can you elaborate?

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    1. Hi Lisa, Sure!

      Like the research double entry log, the literature version asks students to first think rhetorically about the text by asking them to respond to information about the author, the cultural/social context, and perhaps, depending how far we are in the semester, they can jot down notes on how they are understanding various critical approaches to literature. In place of "reading notes" students choose actual passages from the text that they find significant in relation to their responses in the "rhetorical information" section. Along with these passages from the text, students record page numbers, so the scene in the text is easily referenced. In the "response notes" students can respond in a variety of ways from interpretive analysis, which I think promotes "close reading," to explaining what is going on in the passage. Finally, in the summary section, students summarize their findings by commenting on their response or, when they are working on papers, discussing how this information will be included or not included in their papers. I find that using this template helps students organize their approaches to literature because they seem a bit overwhelmed at writing an open-ended paper, in which at first, they feel like they are pulling lofty ideas out of the sky. I find that this using this template helps put some concreteness to their interpretations and helps them "write" the literary analysis before they actually begin to "write" it.

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  2. Following up on your last paragraph I think it would be interesting and informative to look at older texts along with their critical reviews particularly those that have grown in stature since first being published as well as those that have fallen out of favor. What has changed as far as the relationship between the text and the reader to account for this discrepancy? And where does genre fit in? Does it matter whether a text is designated as a fairy story, or fantasy fiction, or a romance in how we receive or process it? What happens when classic texts get "kidnapped" and reappear in mutated form. Mrs Dalloway is the model for Cunningham's "The Hours" whereas Hamlet's characters reappear in Updike's "Gertrude and Claudius" (as well as "Stoppard's "Rosencrantz and Gildenstern Are Dead"). How about texts that are transformed for the stage and cinema? In a macroform it both reflects the editorial decisions made when original printed works are transcribed or translated and passed down, as well as underscoring the mutability of text.

    By the way, you do a good job of summarizing and comparing the two readings!

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    1. Hi Betty, Thanks for this! You bring up some interesting questions that I have considered as well. I am thinking of using Salinger's 'Catcher in the Rye' to focus a discussion on how audience response to this novel since its publication has changed, but the novel manages to remain relevant to its contemporary audience.

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